All Comments on 'Scenes from The Ranch Pt. 01'

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darwin1859darwin1859about 1 hour ago

This was very easy to read and these kinks a very enjoyable. I'm off to read part 2. I hope you will write more on this topic.

rentturtlerentturtleabout 1 month ago

This was great. I loved how you fleshed out the different characters. I can't wait to find out more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Very impressive narrative. Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Outstanding story so far - and this is only the beginning! Please continue......

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago
Really enjoyed this!

Having struggled through a lot of mediocre stuff here lately, I was amazed and overjoyed to read this.

Well imagined and written. Hardly any spelling/grammar errors!

Loved the way we see the different threads coming together.

Really looking forward to the next episode.

Hopefully it doesn't get darker - I think you've got this currently pitched almost perfect.

Can we expect a reunion coming in the not too distant future up at the big house?

;)

Well done.

Thanks!

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