All Comments on 'Scent of Vanilla'

by mrs_mackenzie

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lien60lien603 months ago

will there be a part 2

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Great start! what happens next?

onlybritishformeonlybritishforme3 months ago

This is a really well written and enjoyable story. I assume you are a British writer, as you write much better than the usual largely American stuff we have on this site. I love the way you focus on the characters and your story is much more than just about sex. It is what I try and do in my stories. Will go and look at all of your stuff. Please do a sequel. I would love to know where Lucy goes – does she stay with Tom or does she mix and match or does she go with Henrietta? Keep up the good work

Nurse_TwistedNurse_Twisted3 months ago

Please Mrs Mackenzie, can we have some more?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Brilliant, well written story.

I look forward with excitement to part 2 & were you will take us.

Love the way Henrietta took Lucy's anal cherry on the 1st outing, and the fact that Lucy hasn't as yet tasted Heneritta's can't.

Please don't make us wait to long mrs-mackenzie.

maddictmaddictabout 1 month ago

So naughty, so hot, so not fair. Thanks for letting me into the room. How is Henrietta allowed to call her her bitch. I've tried that tone and it was a real mood killer. Something I can feal that she can not id the sensation of entering my partner. How slick how tight how hot and wet. Lucy is in control for the moment she might be careful how she responds to her message and the time and place she answers. Talk to Tom first away from the table, he might surprise you Lucy.

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