All Comments on 'School for Scandal: Period 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
!

Great stuff; keep it coming.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
It's just as well...

...that you warn us that you're not aiming for realism, or I never would have guessed. This is just a load of OTT fetishes piled high to be sold cheap. It's not erotic, not funny, not realistic, not a coherent fantasy...what the f**k is it supposed to be?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Buy a dictionary

Bowdlerized means edited, not rewritten or altered. Don't assume that you can get away with using big words and hope your audience won't catch it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
50 - 50

Huh? This is great but what the fuck?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Love It

I'm loving your series. I hope this is one where the chapters come out quickly. Don't worry about the idiot critics.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
amazing

sorry but that without a doubt would have to be the biggest load of crap I have ever read. Total waste of time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
great

I love the way the girls are dressed, in heels, hose and uniforms. Hope you have a cheerleader in science class with heels and hose.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Bullshit

Don't bother. This shitty story is a waste of time.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Ignore the pretentious twunts

Your story's imaginative, intelligent, and well written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
You Are Having Fun & Some Readers Are Also

But probably belongs in humor.

Decently written but helter skelter as intended?

brian358brian358almost 18 years ago
Fantastic!

This is a terrific piece of fantasy writing.

Don't worry about the realism. That's out there every day for those who want it.

Some of us prefer to dream of a better world. One like this... :-)

Looking forward to Period 02 very much!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
GREAT!

DON'T LISTEN TO NEGATIVE COMMENTS. KEEP WRITING!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
more

so when do we get to read part 2

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Damn good

Ignore the fucking critics who think everything has to be perfect. This story is awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Awesome

B-e-autiful, actual funny sex that doesn't take it's self to seriously. Just what I wanted to read!

ILienBagbyILienBagbyover 12 years ago
Greeaaatttttt

F U N !

Loved it.

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