by jizzlober
B-e-autiful, actual funny sex that doesn't take it's self to seriously. Just what I wanted to read!
Ignore the fucking critics who think everything has to be perfect. This story is awesome.
This is a terrific piece of fantasy writing.
Don't worry about the realism. That's out there every day for those who want it.
Some of us prefer to dream of a better world. One like this... :-)
Looking forward to Period 02 very much!
But probably belongs in humor.
Decently written but helter skelter as intended?
Your story's imaginative, intelligent, and well written.
I love the way the girls are dressed, in heels, hose and uniforms. Hope you have a cheerleader in science class with heels and hose.
sorry but that without a doubt would have to be the biggest load of crap I have ever read. Total waste of time.
I'm loving your series. I hope this is one where the chapters come out quickly. Don't worry about the idiot critics.
Bowdlerized means edited, not rewritten or altered. Don't assume that you can get away with using big words and hope your audience won't catch it.
...that you warn us that you're not aiming for realism, or I never would have guessed. This is just a load of OTT fetishes piled high to be sold cheap. It's not erotic, not funny, not realistic, not a coherent fantasy...what the f**k is it supposed to be?