by fasthand
Is the first page and the second page supposed to be the same? I hope there's a secpnd part coming involving the mother?
No clue why page 1 & 2 are the same. I didn't submit it that way. Must be a editorial glitch somehow? My apologies.
Have you never heard of the word cock?
A bit repetitive in places and confusing as you begin the story in the present but change to the past.
Could do better.
Messed up. I was fired up about the turn of events towards mommy’s help and then page one repeated itself ! Damn . Can that be fixed ? Want more of this story . Maybe several parts as other mothers are getting involved also . Oh yeah ….