by Mirfel98
So, it reads like part 4 is the end of this story, as far as it goes. I'm really glad you ended it this way, with everyone happy. For me, the story started off really hot, but then got a little too dark and hateful. I know submissive/dominant role playing can be pretty hot, but Jonas was going a little too far for me. When Benjamin treated Theo so cruelly, I was pretty much done with this story. But after a while though, I wanted to know how this would play out. So, Theo comes to terms with who he really is, Benjamin turns out to be a nice guy, and everyone is sexually satisfied. And so am I. Five stars and thanks again for the happy ending. MLF
I love this story, and your writing style. Please write more - either keep this storyline or start a new, darker tale with that beautiful self-doubt/longing/loathing; you've really nailed it -- keep on getting nailed!
Kissing always makes sex even more intimate, and personal for me. [ You wrote, "We kissed for what felt like forever, all the while he was still slowly fucking my ass. "You like that?" Benjamin asked, pulling his face away a little looking me into my eyes. "Yes, I love it." "Perfect. Then let yourself go and enjoy it." ]
A man fucking me and kissing me at the same time while making me admit that I like it, makes me melt!
fucking hot story- great work and ideas , please more like that, like the gamer and talking and sucking under his table so hot, please more blackmail and gamers get blown storys