All Comments on 'Schoolgirls of St. Cats 06'

I've been really liking these.

My only complaint is a bad habit you have of forgetting who is who and writing Miranda when you mean Helene or vice versa. It's distracting, although I can usually backtrack and figure out who you meant.

I'll be very disappointed if Miranda is truly gone, btw.

And I'm glad you enjoy my stories. Miranda will most certainly be back - not in Part 7, but in Part 8.

I'm sorry about the name confusion. I do proof my writing pretty thoroughly, but I understand that mistakes do slip through. I only wish it was easier to edit stories post-submission (I have emailed literotica about it before, but not had a response), I always find somethings I want to tweak.

Again, thanks for taking the time to comment. Means everything to me.

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Kwo isn't a Japanese surname. A bit more research, please.

Superb story. I don't care that Kwo is not a Japanese surname. Open any UK newspaper (except the Daily Mail) and you will find dozens of non English surnames