All Comments on 'Schrödinger's Slut - MF Submissive'

This is my first attempt at erotic short story writing, please feel free to leave all constructive criticism below! I’m always looking for feedback and the opportunity to better my craft.

I love that mix between kinky sex and the emotional aspect and the way that you were able to balence the degradation and love. Also that deep need to please him was written excellently.Over all the writing was so gooood with its attention to detail without making it seem boring.Good job!

This is amazing! I especially enjoyed the grabbing and leading by the throat, the crescendo of false predictions, and the feeling of being at someone's mercy as they choke you. Thanks so much for posting.