by PockettRockett
Maybe Jim and Jon can go a step further and suck each other off. Both guys seems very sexy.
It's such a pleasent surprise to read another one of your stories! And even better - you hit ten this time for me, as I'm much into brother incest, so.... perfect! 💗
I don't have such a story among my own stories, bit some day I will :) I love the complicated topic.
What I loved was how natural it evolved, even though it wasn't long, but didn't seem rushed. I hope they will grew to like each other even more, forgiving their past and toxic sibling rivalry. I keep my fingers crossed for them. Maybe even they will kiss?
BTW, I loved the "My balls hurt so bad" whining ;) I actually used exactly the same phrase to one of my ex when I wanted to fuck him and he had a flu, so wasn't in the mood 😍. I got a flu after that myself... But it was still worth it! 😂
Well, PockettRockett, you really got my attention with this story. This was extremely well written, and the early sibling resentment is something I can relate to. Looking forward to chapter #2 of this great ***** plus story. MLF
I liked the whole plot. Well written story. I kind of wish I had a brother, all I had was a half sister 11 years older than I am. We didn’t get along well either. I hope you do a chapter two to this story.
Thanks for a very hot erotic story with a twist. 🤤 I give it 10 stars
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Jim seems to be interested in Jon too so I hope in the next chapter, Jim sucks Jon’s big cock also.
Great story and had me reading until the end. This is definitely can go in several different directions and you need to build on it. Keep going! You are encouraging me to continue writing on this site as well again! :)
There’s a smoldering here that’s sure lead to a fire. Great start, PockettRockett.
This story really enthralled me because of the basic family drama that happens. Sadly, too many parents always show to much favoritism, one child over the other and not realize how damage they're doing to them (not intentionally though). So far you have written a very well layed foundation. I can't wait to read more. You are a good animator.