All Comments on 'Scoring My Brother Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please continue this. It reminds me of my step brother and me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Maybe Jim and Jon can go a step further and suck each other off. Both guys seems very sexy.

EdeyEdeyover 1 year ago

It's such a pleasent surprise to read another one of your stories! And even better - you hit ten this time for me, as I'm much into brother incest, so.... perfect! 💗

I don't have such a story among my own stories, bit some day I will :) I love the complicated topic.

What I loved was how natural it evolved, even though it wasn't long, but didn't seem rushed. I hope they will grew to like each other even more, forgiving their past and toxic sibling rivalry. I keep my fingers crossed for them. Maybe even they will kiss?

BTW, I loved the "My balls hurt so bad" whining ;) I actually used exactly the same phrase to one of my ex when I wanted to fuck him and he had a flu, so wasn't in the mood 😍. I got a flu after that myself... But it was still worth it! 😂

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well, PockettRockett, you really got my attention with this story. This was extremely well written, and the early sibling resentment is something I can relate to. Looking forward to chapter #2 of this great ***** plus story. MLF

ShortyMacShortyMacover 1 year ago

I liked the whole plot. Well written story. I kind of wish I had a brother, all I had was a half sister 11 years older than I am. We didn’t get along well either. I hope you do a chapter two to this story.

Thanks for a very hot erotic story with a twist. 🤤 I give it 10 stars

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undies4lifeundies4lifeover 1 year ago

A lot of wonderful elements! You are an excellent story teller :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Jim seems to be interested in Jon too so I hope in the next chapter, Jim sucks Jon’s big cock also.

metro610metro610over 1 year ago

Great story and had me reading until the end. This is definitely can go in several different directions and you need to build on it. Keep going! You are encouraging me to continue writing on this site as well again! :)

GybbsGybbsover 1 year ago

Makes me wish I had had a brother :-)

dnsontndnsontnover 1 year ago

There’s a smoldering here that’s sure lead to a fire. Great start, PockettRockett.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

This story really enthralled me because of the basic family drama that happens. Sadly, too many parents always show to much favoritism, one child over the other and not realize how damage they're doing to them (not intentionally though). So far you have written a very well layed foundation. I can't wait to read more. You are a good animator.

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Degree in Accounting somehow led to a career in Graphic Design and copywriting. Writing for school and work is leading into writing for fun. Some fiction, some real-life encounters and some a combination of both.

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