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by Jessbrazil

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Fun little story, well written and well edited Richard. Difficult to improve the English without completely losing the foreign constructions which help the reader to imagine the right accent.

JessbrazilJessbrazilover 1 year agoAuthor

Hi, Anonymous, thanks for your comment. Yes, I would be lost without help from native speakers. I hope you liked!!

Westman99Westman99over 1 year ago

A nice little story, not sure of the plausibility on Rio beach but liked it all the same.

JessbrazilJessbrazilover 1 year agoAuthor

Thank you Westman99. I'm happy you liked :)

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Hi guys, I'm Cristiane. I'm 44 years old and from Brazil. I like to write and read erotic fiction. I had profile here before but for some reason was deleted so I made other for share my work and read your stories.