All Comments on 'Scratching an Itch'

Wife can't solve her no sex problem at home so she cheats. Not much imagination or story.

When the husband finds out there is going to be terror!!!!!!!!

Well written but the answer was to either demand they see a marriage counsellor or tell him she was beyond unhappy and wanted a divorce. I understand her being frustrated but cheating is not the answer. His neighbours must be laughing at him behind his back. How does that make her feel about the one she "loves". How will he feel when someone spills the beans? I think you should write about that aspect of the story.

4 stars. Not bad. It's probably mainly a matter of personal taste but I would have liked to see a little more buildup, some emphasis on her stepping outside of her marriage (maybe a little reluctance) and a bit more detail with longer sex scenes.

Yeh i dont mind putting my name to this. I hate this kind of crap, loving wife ? I dont think so. This is just about an aging bored housewife trying to regain something she lost and in doing this loses much more. Id have loved to ha e read about her getting caught and the subsequent end to her marriage but no just the same old bored s,ut gets fkd by a younger man and gets away with it.

I know it's needed for the story, but if a wife needs more sex, why not ask her husband? Ian't it more common for the HUSBAND to want more sex? I'm sure "Not tonight, Honey," didn't become a cliche for no reason!

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"with an average figure beginning to show a bit of a beer gut" - Do men have "figures?"

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His "ideal" is once a fucking month? Is he gay? Any healthy guy who only gets it once a WEEK complains about his "frigid" wife!

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"A kiss on her forward?" LOL!!

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"Mark and Jeff enjoyed their dinner?" Be careful with similar names! Jess/Jeff!

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Odd that the poker guys would "miss" Mark, but Jeff can bail on them.

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Okay, as readers of my comments know, I don't condone cheating, but if any faithful husband ever deserved to be cheated on, it's Mark!

Just another story of a cheating wife.

"Readers - this is a standalone story involving a sexually frustrated wife who wants more sex, and gets it. I'd really like constructive feedback and commentary - there are far too many anonymous cowards out there with unhelpful comments. So, if you have something worthwhile and want more of this content, let's show by giving good ratings and comments!"

Translation: "I'm pretty thin-skinned and get upset at criticisms or big meanies making comments. I think highly of my writing abilities and you should too, so only give my 5* votes and stroke my ego with compliments."

When she said he should take care of her itch or she would herself maybe she should have been more clear that it did not mean masturbation. She should have point blank said she will divorce or cheat or both.

I didn't catch how long this had been going on? He said he was never a sexual dynamo and she appears to always have been sexual and wanting it? She says at 45 she wants it at least once a day. So how does it now all of a sudden come to a head?

Also, she is playing far too close to home. She will get caught. But I bet her husband won't care and she just continues and he goes to play poker.

Damn whore, BTB

There was no mention of children from the marriage, which I think is a factor in any marriage story, and it seemed like a missing link.

A little too much dialogue between Jess and Scott that I started to skim over because I did not see any point to it. Maybe some people like to read those things, but I like meaningful dialogue.

Regarding the story, it is always tough choosing sides when a husband consistently ignores his wife despite her best efforts. The husband is breaking his vow of loving and cherish. At some point, maybe a wife has the right to choose between a divorce and infidelity.

... by another in the long line of panty wearing cuck wimp authors

Why shouldn't she be pissed off and look else where for some satisfaction? She practically begged him to stay home on a Saturday night, a SATURDAY night, to play with her. No, he'd rather go hang out and play poker with his boyfriends. At least Jeff had the right idea and forgot the poker game to play with a hot wife. Maybe if he dropped a few bombshells on Mark he might get the message. She shouldn't feel guilty - she gave hubby plenty of chances but he made his choice.

not really interesting like the man said just another cheating whore with a stupid husband belongs in the garbage

A couple of things to mention: No healthy man would only want sex once per month under normal circumstances. Is he under a lot of pressure/is his stress level very high? Does his wife take care of her share or does she expect him to do everything? Is the wife a shrew/bitch who yells at and belittles her husband constantly? The situation you describe is very unrealistic. Most men would love to have sex 3 - 4 times a week, even more than that but the limiting factors are 1) age and 2) their other responsibilities - i.e. a job and kids. At some point this will blow up in her face. She may be financially successful, but she will be divorced and known as a cheating tramp. She might get the sex she wants, but doubtful that it includes a relationship with a good guy that is there for here outside of the bedroom. Sex is important, but time wise it is a small part of the relationship. Once her hormones go back to normal levels, who is she going to go out to dinner with? Talk about daily events with? Watch a show with? Be silly with? Will take care of her when she is ill?

I enjoyed this story. Some women do have a high sex drive and have really strong needs and some husbands can be as sensitive to those needs as a house brick. I wish my wife was as interested as she used to be......

Beginning of the end for this marriage. They don't have kids. Once Mark catches her, and he will, he will just move on. Then Jess can be the neighborhood cum dump.

Your comments (mostly) help me, so I thank you for the thoughtfulness. My feedback on your feedback:

Tajfa, CZOFTW, sbrooks103xthank for the constructive comments, helpful

Dunny69: that's what this category is - Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more as defined by Literotica. Why don't you spend time in the Romance section if you want happily-ever-after?

Hubby will be relieved that he no longer has to deal with Jessica's needs. Scott, Jeff and other neighbors and friends will keep Jess occupied daily. Mark can play lots more poker!

Deserved to get cucked

He ignored her even when she indicated she was hot to trot

Its just another story of a husband who just "wont listen to his wife" and as such is a plot device used to write a unknowing cuck/cheating skank story.

Its a tried and failed formula, used as a way to garner sympathy for what is, and rightfully considered so, a cheating whore, as a basis for a pass for her being a cheating whore.

Now write the aftermath when the husband finds out, that would balance this out and I dont mean "Its ok honey I want to see you with an alpha male" type either. A realistically written devastated husband who wont contend with her being a slut. As the majority of men would actually react that way. Few yank on the dicks and watch.

If I don't give you high marks you'll stop submitting stories to this web site?. Read the story and found it shallow, not a lot of meat on this bone. I really didn't like the sex talk preceded with MRS. T. I think their conversation on frequency of sex was way over due. Just seemed like a dead end story, no place to go...

Save yourself the time your writing sucks

poor investment performance. Sometimes its in business, sometimes its with a vehicle or a piece of machinery, sometimes its with a stock or mutual fund, and sometimes its with a spouse. Decent honest people recover what they can by liquidating the asset and reinvesting in a better prospect. All successful people have had to learn how to recover from a poor investment.

If you have an under performing business partner, do you confront her and try to work out a solution, even a dissolution, or do you start to cheat your partner, skim behind their back, start a new secret relationship with a competitor?

You can't justify cheating, lying, betrayal, by blaming someone else for not providing what you want or think you deserve. Mark is being betrayed and cheated, and Jessica is a backstabbing emotion stealing whore. And she has zero guilt or regret, until she gets caught. The father heard the son bragging about fucking a married neighbor, within a few days of the event, and she thinks she can keep her adultery hidden from her husband?

Scott is a decent husband but a lousy fuck. Jessica is a great fuck but a lousy human being. Who would you rather be married to?

And who would you rather use for sex?

Men age like wine, women age like cheese. I hope Jessica gets enough cum and memories now to last her through the mold and the stink, as a single washed up whore.

Great story. Thanks for the effort.

Really, try ... ahh, better not. It’s good to quit while you are talent free. Really. Do it.

26thNCuck approved

Like the LW description reads. In reality her husband probably wouldn’t get all that worked up if he found out. Just as long as they didn’t rub his nose in it. No marriages have to end. Old married guys know what I’m talking about. It’s a lot different when the kids are grown and you’re settled in. No pregnancy worries and

No falling in love.

So don’t let the moronymous crowd stifle your output.

R.

A half decent story, spoiled a little by typos and confused names.

Most of the other comments here are about judging the wife - the typical double-standard! It’s a very hot story and it’s fictional, so lighten up people - this is a fantasy site! This story could use a bit of editing to fix some typos and other errors (they can be distracting), but otherwise well-written story. Thanks for sharing!

I agree with @ScorpioJJ...This marriage is dead...The problem with this story is this line has been used millions of times...It has nothing new, so after the first lines it becomes boring...1*

"I know it's needed for the story, but if a wife needs more sex, why not ask her husband? Ian't it more common for the HUSBAND to want more sex? I'm sure "Not tonight, Honey," didn't become a cliche for no reason!"

She did ask him for more sex, and he turned her down so that he could clean a carburetor!

This story is a better version of Complacency Breeds Infidelity, better to me, anyway, because I knew of a guy like Mark . . . because I was the guy who fucked his wife.

It was the mid 1990s, in Hampton, Virginia, and Karen, this hot little number, was cruising the old America Online Hampton M4F chat room. I was a bit leery of those, but, to make a long story short, her husband, a city fireman, spent all of his time with his buds, and not enough taking care of his wife.

I took care of his wife, for about three months, before an out-of-state job opportunity beckoned. I have no idea what she did after I moved away, but she probably found another guy to scratch her itches.

In this story, Mark does the same thing: he spends his time with his male friends. Really, he needs to just get past his revulsion at sucking dicks, because he enjoys the company of men much more than that of women, including his own wife. She couldn't even get him hard on a Saturday morning? She needed to talk about her lesbian experiences and play girl/girl porn to get him going? Mark had some real problems!

The LW readership ought to understand something: the Marks of this world are not as uncommon as you might think. He's written as kind of an extreme case, but there are a lot of guys out there just like him, guys you'd never guess were like that.

A lot of readers don't like my frequent saying that if a husband doesn't take care of business at home, someone else will, but it's just plain true. No, I don't understand why it's true, but that doesn't mean it isn't.

It has been said that, when it comes to sex, women need a reason, but men just need a place. That's an oversimplification, but it's mostly true, and in the majority of cases, if a wife cheats on her husband, the reason is that she's not satisfied at home. Yeah, there are random occasions where a normally satisfied wife just gets a sudden attack of the hornies, the situation is right and alcohol is involved, but those lead to one-night stands, not affairs. When it's an actual affair, the truth that few men are willing to admit is that it's the husband's fault!

. . . but is loath to admit: when a wife decides to cheat, it is because her husband failed.

Mark failed, pure and simple. This story made his failure blatantly obvious, so that even some of the BTBers admit it, but it’s also true in the “we had a perfect marriage and great sex life” stories.

Gosh! If the husband doesn't give his wife the sex she wants when she wants it she's entitled to commit adultery?

Jeepers! Mark's wife isn't some sixteen year old girl. She's a middle aged woman with two grown kids. What a terrific role model for the daughter!

Get real! This is one loser of a woman. After all those years of marriage she doesn't know how to talk to her husband? She doesn't know how to persuade him to respond?

I know what we need here. A rock party! Bury the adulterous bitch up to her shoulders and stone her to death. For once the Arabs have a good idea.

What's next? Mark finds out! He confronts the lawn boy. He confronts his poker buddy. He spreads the word far and near his wife is a whore and ready for anybody. Hell, run and ad in the paper. He tells Sarita. He kicks his wife to the curb and starts over. He'd soon find there are dozens of women ready and willing to take his soon to be ex-wife's place.

And the ex-wife? She already knows the clock is ticking. In a couple years she'll be an old hag working the cash register at Walmart wondering what went wrong. (No offense to Walmart cashiers.)

I might add this is coming from me, Carvohi; well know wimp and RAAC. Yes, even I have some standards.

carvohi

Thanks for the story. Wouldn't a sequel be just grand?

No, it’s not always the husbands fault. If he has low T or is grossly overweight or some other cause for his loss of libido it is his fault if he does nothing to correct his situation. That means he has abandoned his wife’s sexual needs. It is the same as a woman in menopause or new baby exhaustion when she abandons her husband’s needs. Communication is the key. If they talk and one spouse continues to ignore the other, then maybe an ultimatum is necessary. If there is no resolution, then get divorced. Cheating is never ok. While RR is quick to blame the husband for the wife’s infidelity, some chicks just WANT to play with new dicks and justify their misbehavior by blaming the spouse. Keep in mind, with No-Fault divorce laws, the chick can always refuse sex with no financial consequences. The guy gets fucked no matter what he does or doesn’t do for his wife. Lastly, any guy who targets married women is a fucktard of the fist magnitude!

All I can see here is a train wreck divorce destroying a few family's, and friendships. Who's to blame. Both. Wife could'a should'a, same as Hubby..But, well, yes, I see a occupation at the shopping center as a cashier as well. Regardless, If some one doesn't like what's in a marriage, the solution is simple ...GET OUT....Yet this person wants to fuck everyone, but still requires the income from Hubby..No, this story would generate a murderous rampage.

I liked this story a lot actually. The lonely housewife thing was always a fantasy of mine when I did in-home repair work. Sadly, it never happened. The only reason I didn't give it 5 stars is because (FOR ME), I prefer the imagery of the woman more, and it wasn't represented too much here (colour of her clothes, type of bra/panties, etc.). I always start at this site for a "session" (in order t get worked up), and this story definitely helped!

results in a "TERMINAL" case of Poison Ivy.

Wry hot story and every college kid - young guys dream to fuck the older hot hot married mom ( neighbor, friends mom , teacher , etc ) . It’s the animalistic urge to take and dominate. Remembering the horney older mom and having her Cum while pounding her ass into the bed . The dirty talk and abusing the hubby will all follow. Now she took the son and the fathers dick next door . It will never stop because she will always have a dick to fuck . Hot story but my reality is I don’t like cheating or married pigs or wimp hubby who don’t fuck there wives . This story really works both way because lots of times it’s the wife not wanting to fuck anymore and the desperate hubby winds up cheating. It all makes for a great story line but cheating sucks and if either said what’s really happening and changes need to be made before they jump in another bed .

Just dropped by to say hello. Still waiting.

Ignore the douchebags - there are so many haters on this site, most of whom haven't written a word or can barely read. Frigging idiots. This is an erotic literature site, not prize winning novels of the century. Keep doing what you do. These people are idiots. I enjoyed jerking off to this story.

I don’t get the highly negative comments you attract. Maybe it’s some weird jealousy or maybe it’s just me. But wait. . . . It’s unusual that I comment at all on a story, not even the manifestly terrible one whose literary content couldn’t be found with a microscope. And I can’t recall the last time I scored a 5* on one. Maybe I’ll figure it out. Thanks for the work, especially the plot development. If you do a sequel, get him laid in the carburetor repair isle at Home Depot.

Liked the story somewhat but sex with your next door neighbors should have been more emotional. She seemed to have no empathy towards Jeff’s wife showing no remorse. She goes after Jeff then fucks him in her marital bed without any emotional regrets towards her husband whom she supposedly loves. The story would have been much better if there was more before and after emotional feelings.

Also I don’t understand why sooo many authors have to add taboo anal fingering or fucking into a first time sex encounter as if she were a complete slut rather than the wife of his neighbor friend. Adding the unlikely disrespectful anal yuk into the story was a distraction from the erotica.

I like the plot of idiot husband oblivious to wife’s needs gets cheated on. Serves him right

Didn’t like it. And as for getting cheated on was something the clueless husband deserved; no husband deserves that!

If she was truly bereft not having enough sex from her husband, then she needed to have it out with him & divorce him if her need was that bad.

I know these are just stories, but reality needs be observed. NO HUSBAND OR WIFE DESERVES TO BE CHEATED ON!

Bill S.

Bill S: think about your asinine comment: "I know these are just stories, but reality needs be observed." Ummm...translation "I know these aren't real but they should be real". Dude, stick to national geographic or CNN - you definitely want to avoid the horror or monster section!