by darktwin
Wow very well written,nice subject matter very captivating and thought provoking. All in all a great story,well done.
I am a massive fan of time travel stories and all that it entails. I fell in love with this story. Was brilliantly written and the science, however brief it was, was spot on.
I liked how he could remember what younger Jack was doing as it was happening, and in the same space couldn't remember other things as more and more things didn't happen. Makes you think about time in a different way. I liked how Jack felt the longing for someone to pleasure him in only ways that he could and then having that happen. In my mind it wasn't a dream and now he can plan his live accordingly. There should be more stories like this. Well done