All Comments on 'Seafaring Delight Charters'

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2soon2no2soon2noabout 3 years agoAuthor

I would love some feedback, and I'm thinking of taking Pam and Sharon on their own journey? Any thoughts?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I enjoyed the story and loved the idea. I think there is room to improve it with some more detailed descriptions of the events in the story and the way the characters felt.

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Over active imagination. I love a woman with a strong sexual appetite, and she is willing to use her sexuality as a part of her everyday life. Women need to own their value, including, but not limited to their own sexuality.

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