All Comments on 'Search for the Goddess'

Loved this story so much

Hopefully there will be more

Very good storyline. Kinda short but so were mine. Its daunting to read those other storys that are 3 and 5 pages long when it takes so much effort to even write a 1zie for this site. Some basic punctuation and word errors, but not too distracting for me. Having a second pair of eyes or even just reading your story aloud can help. Takes patience though xD

Very nice read. Eagerly awaiiting the next part. 5 stars from me.

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