All Comments on 'Seax Killer I'

Hot story, so love they are together and having fun.

Clever story. Maybe, in a possible part two, we could have some sister on sister sex.

Good story, but the tenses were all over the place. In your first lines alone "I woke up in a dark room laying on the cold hard floor. I jump to my feet once I realize clothes are gone..." you jump between past and present tense which is concerning. I'll check out your other stuff but would recommend keeping an eye on that. Thanks for sharing your story

How quickly we forget.

The door closes as I walk in and the light turns on. She shields her eyes from the light and I look at her laying naked and handcuffed to the bed just like Zoe was. Once she lowers her arms she looks over at me and smiles. She leaps off the bed and runs over to me.

Wish we had minus two stars.

To reply to the comment about being hand cuffed and getting up. When I first mentioned Zoe was handcuffed I said she was handcuffed with a long chain. I could have written this better to describe they could move through the room but unable to leave but I feel that loosely got the point across. Hope that helps and thank you for your feedback :)

Thank you for your comment about my tenses. I know I am horrible at it and trying to get better. Thank you for your constructive feed back!

Great fun story, hopefully continue it with the sisters?

that was great love to see it a movie

Great story. Seems like at least of sisters would have become preg. That makes a good twist. Lilly might love that. Lucky brother.

great story!

hot writing overall and i like the outcome

cliffhanger felt slightly odd, but i do await a possible part 2!

my only criticism is your use of tenses, as previously stated by another commenter, but it's still very readable and good.

wouldve been hot if one or two of them ended up pregnant though

those were creampies, after all!

lily more than likely takes birth control or has an IUD being a pornstar, while maya probably takes birth control as well considering the comment that she used to take creampies from her ex, but who knows about olivia or zoe! i think zoe having been pregnant after the 3 month timeskip wouldve been especially hot

but other than that, great job with this!