by HnyscklRose4
You've got the right stuff, babe. Wow. This one made me sweat. Believable dialogue, hot sex and some real emotion holding it all together raises it above the typical jerk-off fare. Well done.
Very hot story. I didn't like the idea of him calling her a slut but the rest of the story was amazing.
I thought y’all were gonna get back together... now I’m hot, bothered, and sad lol