All Comments on 'Second Chances Ch. 08'

I hope you are enjoying the story. I've just submitted Ch. 15 tonight, and there's one (maybe two) after that to finish the story. Looks like they are posting one Ch. per day, so sorry for the delay. I love to get your comments, so let me know what you think.

Cheers,

Haremgirl

I'm really looking forward to the remaining chapters. This is a well written story, with as many chapters in the works, i'm looking for more twists and turns to come.

This story is wonderful!!! I loved the story between Aiden and Naomi and can't wait to find out what might happen between Brian and Sarah. I love how you're creating stories for each of the brothers. Hopefully you'll also include one with Liam...

I've just caught up, and now am just waiting for tomorrow. Thank you for telling us that, all things being equal, the next chapter is only one that day away!

Roger B

Sorry, this was supposed to be in Novels/Novellas category not Nonconsent/Reluctance. I must have accidentally chosen the wrong category when I submitted it...Sarah is obviously not reluctant, the naughty little vixen.

Cheers,

Haremgirl

i absolutely love these stories, you've got me hooked. Keep up the excellent work. Thanks

of this wonderful story.. Y.L.F. Your Loving Father?? But what is dear old dad doing unbuttoning her blouse?? Maybe her memory is faulty?? NO, they aren't the same person.. So we don't know HIS name, yet.. But Dad is Thomas and she is Sarah Marin.. From where?? And how did she get out in the middle of nowhere without a horse?? She went walking for miles with a suitcase?? Very odd!! Quite a mystery there!!

...of Aidan and Ms. Tisdale, but too much suspension of disbelief for me to get into Brian and angel's story.

There story, so far, is a litlle too far-fetched