All Comments on 'Second in Command Ch. 01'

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msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Hot Story!

I like this combination. Three tiers of control. Makes for an interesting read. You might want to try an editor before you submit, I saw one gender error and a grammatical error.

Keep writing.

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