All Comments on 'Second Wife Ch. 03'

half the 00 I give it

paint him he's a hypocrite. And a nutcase. "I love Mary and Susan's parents dearly, and would never want to have them look down on me..." yeah like hell he does. The lil sis is a nutter too. They need to be caught. And "...the sanctity of the Plan" should be the source of his doom. It was well written yet not enjoyable. Ramble on.

I know there is a method to your story and how it will unfold. Ignore the critics. I am looking forward to each chapter and seeing how the characters grow.

I love your stories. Haven't found a bad one on your page yet.

Once he breaks her totally into a slut, is he going to give her up? He has spent a lot of time and effort making her into the kind of woman most married men would want. He could keep her on as a fuck slut maid, and have her blow him anytime he wants her, and her asshole and pussy is just there for his taking. Keep her horny, and I hope to read the next chapter soon. Thanks........Rich

Yay, one of my favourite characters from Bean Counter. The most intriguing part of Second Wife is Bill's Plan. Looking forward to seeing where it's all going. As someone else said, ignore the critics.

I have been waiting for this since I read the first part... Don't listen to what the haters are saying... This story is great, nobody is forcing them to read it.. Its nice to read something different, where for once the man has the upper hand, instead of just rolling over and letting his wife crap all over him in front of everybody... Please continue writing and if we have to buy the ending of this story like the last one, no problem there either, it was worth it in my mind... Can't wait to see how this one unfolds, and if they end up together in the END... HINT :)

Blknight from Montana

Missed your writing. Hope you don't keep us waiting too long. I want to see what happens with the other teacher.

I read the first story and also Cock of Ages. While they were interesting in a sick sort of way, this is something else. It is a woman hating account of serial rape and spousal abuse presented for entertainment. No more.

God sucking cock and swallowing became a real saving grace for me.