All Comments on 'Secret Life of a Teacher'

I think you meant "prim and proper", not prime. But, that was enough to make me skip the story altogether. I see it's your first story, which is why you should have been all the more diligent in making sure things were correct. You had one chance to introduce us to your work. You fucked that up.

Give sexy Dave a hairy chest and abs!

Having actually read the story, I would say it's a surprise that it's your first one. That first anonymous guy was a dick. It's a good story, just needs a little work. Your lead-up was good, but the sex scene kinda failed to deliver. I hope you do the sequel, but be more detailed and descriptive.

I think it is a good story.