All Comments on 'Secret Masochist - Education End'

I suppose that’s why they’re called fantasies. Incredibly well written, you set the scene really well it’s disturbingly full of realism. I loved the sub’s point of view you covered everything really well. I still have all of my previous reservations as per my comment on the last chapter.

The ending wasn’t quite what I was expecting even though I wasn’t sure what I was expecting. Still it’s a prime example of why teachers and students aren’t supposed to fuck each other. I know she’s legally old enough to have sex but aren’t we influenced by our early introductions to sex, those influences in many cases can take hold and have a life long effect. Essentially she was a vulnerable adult not because of any physical/ mental infirmity but more because of his position of authority; that whole ‘duty of care’ thing. He has “groomed” her sexually possibly but necessarily altering her sexuality and shaping it to match his desires.

FML, how I despise the word “groomed” it’s another trigger for me but I couldn’t think of an alternative. So overall it’s a breathtaking story of two halves consisting of them exploring her sexuality and her discovering the bliss of submission. The other half of the story is him being a manipulative bastard abusing his authority and using her.

I had hoped it was going to be more positive and presumably in a fantasy scenario it is? As a reflection on reality because absolutely everything in the story is very definitely achievable and very realistic. Something almost exactly the same is probably happening in towns and cities all over the world right now. Yeah so when the story involved Drew I was hoping for a transfer of “ownership” so that she could pursue her own life. The teacher would drop her anyway when he spotted another girl he wanted to mould, as predators do. Got to say it made me laugh when he expressed concern about her not reaching her full potential, very ironic no doubt the potential would be much much lower than anything suitable for a man. Wow yeah, that was pretty depressing I probably should have ignored this chapter huh.

Thanks for sharing, I’m looking forward to reading more of your stuff 😉

Tess (UK)

RE: Wow

Thank you for reading my story and sharing how you felt. I can't help but feel like I succeeded in what I set out to do given your reactions throughout the course of the tale. When you talk of the "two halves" of the story that perfectly captures how I myself feel. Mr. Peterson is a rather despicable man when all is said and done (and how full of himself, convincing himself and no one else he cares about her "potential") but he was able to give RC something quite special in spite of himself: the ecstasy of self-discovery.

You're not the first reader to express a desire to see more "positive" outcomes for RC. I have a rather dark erotic imagination, and I use her to explore my secret desires to be made to submit to horrible men. I've written a few adventures for her over on chyoa.com, and this one (which I wrote about a year ago) is perhaps the tamest of those tales. I may share some more of them here, but I'll probably be a bit more upfront with the warning labels next time ^^

Of course, I also have other ideas that are a bit less dark and depressing, and it seems from the audience reaction that this may be the perfect place to share them. Thanks again for coming along on this journey with me, even if it didn't lead quite where you were expecting.

Love it! I want a Mr. Peterson

I started the story back in december for the first time and ´redded´ immidiatly after part one. I wasn´t due to the psychological strain due to the harsh covid measures here in Europe not able to cope with a noncon story.

Your story is hot and amazingly well written but it isn´t bdsm. There is no ssc there isn´t even risc. It´s noncon and I just couldn´t cope.

Now in january things are better and I could read your story.

I saw that allmost exclusivly femsubs left comments. That´s no surprised due to the ´you´ narrator that forces your audience to identify with the femsub. Some readers simply arent up tothis task.

I´m happy that I could binge the story. That meant that me a male dom had to do the emotional work of identifying with your protagonist only one. And it was worth it.

Reading your story when ik came out would have be highly frustrating. The reader puts the work in it but when he fully identified the read due to the shortness of the parts would be already over.

I understand that many males/dom abandoned the story at one point or another.

My opinion about your story.

Its a flawed masterpiece. I´m happy having read it. And I´m greatly thankful that you shared it with us.

Sorry everyone for the poor spelling of my first comment.

It was the first time I wrote something in English in 2021...

I should have rewritten it immediatly.

What I wanted to say was:

First: choosing the right category is important. There is a difference between BDSM and noncon/reluctance stories. Some readers like myself like the thrill of a nice "forbidden" noncon-fantasy but sometimes it can be hard to read them. Mostly when the reader starts feeling empathy or starts identifying with the "victim" of a noncon-story.

Therefore I "redded" the story in december. I wasn't able to cope with the emotional strain due to my personal situation. (covid-quarantine en so forth...)

Your story is exceptionally well written and I'm really happy to have made the decision back in december to note it as "to read later" but... well... sorry your story isn't BDSM. There was never a enlightend consensus between parties. No SSC or RISC what so ever. So sorry... wrong category.

I underwrite everything Tess allready said about the mysogynistic scumbag...

Second:

You chose a you narrator. This as advantages you "suck" your reader into the story. But there are disadvantages too... you force the reader to identify with your protagonist. It's no coincidence that mostly people that identify as femsub commented your story.

Reading that story with this narrator can be too much for some people who identify themself as dom and/or male. The relative shortness of your installments didn't help neither. You ask your reader to identify with your protagonist which can be work. And when the reader did it, the chapter is allready finished.

I'm happy that I have binged your story so I had to do the work only once.

Concluding: Your story is a flawed masterpiece. I'm happy having read it. Thank you for sharing!

I didn’t think there was enough masochism though the title proclaims it.