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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Ah-ha

Nice self promotion, I have indeed seen what you did there. Nice work Mr. Thomas

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Obi Wan just threw up.

Not good.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Brilliant

Your writing is amazing I just can't wait to here more of Alex and Gavin! The husband fiasco was fascinating and you add a great story and sex line into the story. Well done I absolutely love it and wish you would post more. Better late then never I say.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
oh my

Can't wait for more.

JudyLeeJudyLeeover 8 years ago
Naughtiness

I love the story. Even if I may not have time to comment. I saw another book title. Where can I get your 'vanilla 'books?

Scarlet615Scarlet615over 8 years ago
Good dialogues

I do like the dialogues in your story. Both the one between Madelyn and Alex and later the boiling conversation she had with Gavin. They seem very credible.And the sex scenes are hot.

Shadow21GXShadow21GXalmost 8 years ago
Dialogue, plot, and a jedi

Really enjoy the interactions. This story balances the sex and plot very well. This is one where I feel both are equally important.

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