All Comments on 'Secret Smiles and Three Little Words Pt. 18'

I do so love this story!

I'm loving this story cant wait for the next part

As much as I enjoy this series I felt this chapter was somewhat forced and awkward. I would say this update was like boxed wine, does it get the job done? Yes, is it very good? No. But I still look forward to seeing your next chapter.

So will we get to hear anything else about Elizabeth?

Yes Elizabeth makes a return but for now it's all about G and A. It seems that the last two updates have been "abrupt" according to readers...was it the length of the stories that made it feel that way or the wiring itself? Something to ponder, I'm trying to balance chapters that aren't too long and getting the story out.

Seems you have some unimpressed readers, but I have to say I fully enjoyed Dom Alex. I felt that the last chapter was rushed and didn't hold a great deal of interest to me personally, but I really liked Alex's opportunity to embrace being in control. Don't be discouraged by a few negative comments, I think the ratings speak for themselves!

I think that what people are referring to is the way you cut the chapters mid scene. It would be better reading if you would finish a scene and then break it off.

Other than that I love this story! Keep up the great work!

I don't agree with some of the people that have posted feedback. I think that leaving one waiting on edge for the next part of the story is good. I however am enjoying this story and have not been disappointed in any part, I am a poet and have not tried my hand at doing any poetry or writing in the erotic area.

I agree that the chapters cut abruptly or so it seems perhaps it's the way Alex is feeling as well n her new life.

Very much enjoying this series

It seems that Alex has learned a lot from her master, enhancing her own natural talents. I wonder how it will affect her relationship with Gavin?

I have loved this series since the beginning. I don't mind the shorter chapters and the "rushing" doesn't really bother me because the story itself is just so good. Easy 5 stars for me and I'm very picky. This chapter had me literally laughing out loud. I loved it! I'm just glad that I'm only about halfway through what you have posted at this point. Please keep up the amazing work!!

Holy shit Dom Alex is totally hot

Very hot and very wow. I was captivated the entire time. I could see it all, hear it all, amazing.

What now? Will it change the dynamics of their relationship? As much as I enjoyed this chapter I would have loved it if Alex had gone from the Dom scene into a submission pose before Gavin asking if she had pleased him. That would have cemented her desire to only engage her inner Dom at his pleasure. I just don't want anything to jeopardize their new relationship.

I felt that rush of power and I hate controlling people. Amazing. Was Gavin testing her before deciding if he would let her drive the car? Innnnnteresting.