All Comments on 'Secretaries Club Ch. 01: Anna'

by Liver96

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Anonymousalmost 4 years ago

Good rough draft

Good rough draft. Please take the time to refine your poorly edited story. And then have someone who uses english as their first language proofread it. Then resubmit. Good start

interdictr about 3 years ago

Great!

Anonymousalmost 3 years ago

Same as what the other Guy said.

I had to stop reading as the básic gramatical errors were too distracting.

Story looked good though! Keep working on It please!

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