by CiaoSteve
...this is a wonderful story. But the ending is unsatisfactory, and there is one particularly nagging loose end. That first. Master was using some sort of drug in the early chapters, her recruitment. You ceased that thread without sewing it up. What was the point of the drugs? And the ending - I know you wanted it left to the reader to make the decision for her, but this was not well executed. But thanks for a great story, with a few minor problems. Definitely looking forward to that next beginning.
I’ve been following Susan’s stories and totally understand her decision to return to a “normal” life. She was cowerted into her role and training. Yes, she enjoyed learning about her self but it was being lied to and mislead. That is what made her decision for her. She was willing to be open but didn’t want to feel used. Her awakening to her feelings for Bex opened up her world. She was discovering her “BI” side. Looking forward to reading more about what her life holds for her. Thank you for these Hot and Erotic adventures.