All Comments on 'Secrets and Magic Ch. 04'

Granted, I haven't had to wait as long as some others...

This is yet another example of great storytelling. We're in an erotic storytelling community here, though the concern that there was absolutely no sex here is somehow completely invalidated. The story itself speaks, sings.

The sexual tension, on the other hand... One word: Hot. Gotta love the unrequited love bit. Buildup for the release... IF it comes.

Great work, Savannuh. Keep 'em coming, but take all the time you need! As I said, it's worth the wait.

Please update soon! 5 stars

I've been waiting so long for this chapter and wish it had more to it so please hurry with the next

Ive wanted for so long.. There isnt many sci_fi stories with black women.. or interracial in general.... I love this story

Please update soon, I eagerly await the rest of the story.

I always thought I was too proud to beg, but screw it. Please, please, please, PLEASE update this story! Please! I love what you've done so far, and I can't wait to see what happens next. I know that life and other important things take precedence, but I sincerely hope that you can update! Just think of the people you would make incredibly happy by doing it!!

Good luck, and lots of inspiration to you!

Update plz. I definitely need to know what happens

MORE MORE

Please come back and finish this enthralling story! You are an excellent writer and I can't wait to see where this goes.

Really good story. Probably only about half finished, but was still worth reading the four posted chapters.