All Comments on 'Secrets and Solace Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Interesting story, I like it.

The tag "mother" might not be correct but "sister" though.

sp9983sp9983about 3 years ago

It had the potential to be good, but you rushed it with a shitty ending.

Pecos_P3t3Pecos_P3t3about 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the positive words, folks. I appreciate it. I plan to post part two this weekend. I made a couple of silly mistakes on this one and I want to avoid that with the next part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good story. Different plot. It will be interesting to see how you resolve the distance factor between thes 2.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Really well written. Good dialogue and characterization. Good erotic use of dirty talk.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Just an average story you needed more information on the mother , did they live an abusive life? And what about their father? And there was no incest!!! Gave it 3 waiting on next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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