All Comments on 'Secrets Revealed: Grandma's Diary'

Exceptional. Clear, concise, proper grammar and correct English spelling (except for one word)

The plot was well above the average for this genre of stories, almost to the point of being feasible and believable.

Description of the sex acts was perfect without pointless repetition of the same words.

Full credit to you.

From down under.

Fantastic story

What luvanuki said. Best thing I've read here in a while. Outstanding!!

Excellent story. Great build up. There must be a follow-up to this story. Would really like to know what happens with their lives. But whatever you do, don't make this into a family f*ckfest. I think that would ruin the love between Chuck and his sister.

You have written a beautiful story of life and death and love thank you for your words of the family who live the life but became them .

Well done pat your self on your back . I enjoy your work and looking forward to the future opportunities that will keep me on a tight lesh

Very engaging and well balanced with character development and the dealing with incest issues, the time periods and such.

Please write more

Wonderful first story! Full of surprises, fun, lots of family sex.... you cannot beat that combination!

I just hope your second story can be as entertaining. Keep up the good work. I’ll be watching for more.

Really really enjoyable.

Great story

A very well constructed story. Excellent grammar and spelling. Impressive because characters in stories of inbreeding are often portrayed as being barely smarter than insects. Would love to see the generations described in Ancestry.com. :)

Wonderful story. Well crafted. Delightful plot. A follow up is definitely warranted. Audrey and Chuck need to experience their parents sexually.

Wowwwwww, what a great storyline. More than 5 stars, Please continue. Thanks for sharing.

Try 'çhoked', rather than 'çhocked'. Only spelling error that jumped out at me.

Along with the rest. Superb writing!!

One of the best I’ve read. Well done.

Great story.

I remember reading this story on the Adult Friend Finder website some time ago.

That story has more turns and forks than their family tree....lmao. Thanks for sharing.

Great exciting story. Need to continue with more sexual dialogue between Audrey, Chuck and their parents. Then eventually the actual sexual act between them.

A wonderful spin of tale…loved it….a bit of editing would improve it a lot…

Can I give the Story 10 Stars

Hot damn! What a first offering to this site. Not able to formulate an intelligent comment on this story – other than to say you knocked it out of the park in terms of storyline and the quality of your writing. 5+fave+follow+hopes for many more contributions by you.

I feel Mom and Dad should get with Audrey and Chuck, and talk through the situation of family incest. Then the four of them go to the parents bedroom and have some serious family fun !!!

Great work and please keep writing....

WOW WOW WOW I never expected all the in house fucking. You held my interest until the very end. I have but one question " what NOW"

I love stories with juicy secrets - and 9 pages of them! Whoa! I was hooked early on & actually sharing in the emotions at some points! Great work - thanks for sharing your talents with us!

Loved this story! Like the previous poster i found my emotions matched the emotions of the two kids. I was really hoping the book would end with the family having fun together but how you ended it was actually quite perfect. Well done!

I read this story on another site 5 years ago

Grandma's Secret by SquattingEagle Posted Mon 1st of May 2017. https://www.sexstories.com/

I hope are the original author reposting and not a plagiarist. If you are, you’re a piece of shit!