All Comments on 'Secuction Ch. 03'

So she finds out that her BF is fucking her mom, and then allows him to continue.

Doesn't get mad when it continues and always says yes when Zach asks for permission.

Then in retaliation for being mad over something that should have been expected in a "Three-Way" group she goes and fucks someone behind his back...

Zach should really drop her like a rock.

It will be really annoying if this turns into Zach begging for scraps whilst Nicki can fuck anyone she likes.

As good as the other chapters

A get even fuck is not always a good idea, fucking Zack's dad could hurt him where he might never reover.

What a dumb bitch you have created

You really screwed the pooch with this chapter and have ruined the rest of the story. There's no way out on this one. I have read all of this story I'm going to read. In fact I'm moving on to some other author who understands that some things should never be written into a story of this nature. Having the girl screw his father behind his back was a #1 screwup. Bye.

The old fart.

This budding love affair could end right here. It could also end the budding relationship between Zak and Mike.. It shows a serious character flaw in Nicki destroying what was a beautiful and innocent (despite those raging hormones) girl.

The relationship revenge fuck was a terrible idea. The opd guy should have stopped it. I hope zach drops her, but you will probably twist it into a 4-way group sex series which i will be even more pissed about. What she did to him showed her intent to hurt him...end it with a clean break!

Interesting chapter. It would have been better to explain that "Mike" had always had a high sex drive, but since his wife died, his passion for life and sex seemed to die as well. You spent a long time talking about "Nicki's" mom sex drive. Very little about Mike's sex drive. Looked like Mike does not matter.

This chapter was terrible. Deliberate revenge sex involving his father was very disappointing. Gotta give it a 1.

i cannot blame her at all....especially with hormones all over the place.

The worst turn ever....