All Comments on 'Seduce Pt. 01'

Unreadable

Unless it is titled DEV Dies

Not even a great editor could have saved this mess. Do a better job of proof reading. This was a complete train wreck.

Mr Nothing, you appear to be a nice guy, but seriously, writing for LW just isn’t working for you. Try Romance, they’re a more genial bunch than you find here.

This reads like a porta potty smells.

Nuf' said.

Thank you all for your comments.

My parents are way ahead of cheap peoples thought process. They are the sustaining power behind me. They taught me gentility and to respect others' parents in reality.

An author is not anybody's enemy, by any chance, unless someone has some ill thought to demoralize him.

DEV has appeared in 12 of my stories of which 10 are 4+ ratings. So, DEV is an accepted character for my readers.

Keep on posting your comments.

Those make me even come with more boldness with each subsequent submission.

Have a great day.

Keep reading Literotica.

SweetNothingsAndBeyond

Why do authors like you even bother to post trash? You have one fucked up mind to come up with this garbage. Gave it the usual one star rating that all "garbage" stories receive in this category. So sick and tired of sewer rat authors.

Nagyon gyenge próbálkozás volt,de ez semmilyen műfajban nem állja meg a helyét!Nem is beszélve,hogy szinte olvashatatlan a gyenge nyelvtan és írásmódja miatt! Talán mással és máshol kellene próbálkoznia !

Shit stains like the character Dev in this story eventually meet what we Americans like to refer to as a BAMF(Bad Ass Mother Fucker),and then the rest of their miserable existence is lived in physical as well as mental torment.

I have personally seen so called Ladies Men shit and piss themselves when a streetwise Alpha predator sets out with a vendetta against these oxygen thieves.

Dear Author,

I sympathy for whatever mental affliction you have that causes you to write like you do.

Forget what a handful of critique say.

You've a unique way of story telling. I liked it. Keep it up.

Thanks 😘

I liked the story. Though the length could have been reduced. I see lots of negative comments. Give a damn. It is your story. Half of the comment makers don't know even a shit about story or story writing.