All Comments on 'Seduced By My Employee's Feet'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Please put your foot fetish aside for now and research basic punctuation and sentence construction. Here is just one example of many, many errors:

"Good morning(COMMA) Lisa(PERIOD) (CAPITAL "C")an you come into my office?"

An editor to check the typos and missing letters might be helpful as well.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Nice start. Liked the characters. Hope you have more planned.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Great start but

Wonderful start, seek some proofreading help and you’ll have a real winner here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Nice!

Great stuff! I hope we see more of her ceding her power to the allure of Kaylees feet!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great!!!! You're a gifted writer!!!!

Ja_kopJa_kopalmost 3 years ago

Es gibt leute die sklaven zuhaben verdienen

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Is that all? I would lie to see it progress, turning the boss into a fully submissive.foot slave

ianmoone_ckianmoone_ckover 2 years ago

I hope you write another part to this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very hot, terrible grammar.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Keep writing!!!!!👍👍

Slaveslutpatty69Slaveslutpatty69over 1 year ago

Please write more. This was very hot

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

lisa is a stupid woman, obviously this never happens in the real world. there is no way any boss would ever become a foot slave to her subordinate.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Please continue!

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