All Comments on 'Seducing My Aunt in a Vacation'

You can’t even write a thousand words at a stretch and you expect people to be interested in your stories?

Please post the feedbacks in the comments which will help me in mending the upcoming stories.

Great start, looking forward to more :D

Proof Reading Required !

Perhaps you might source a person more proficient in American English to edit for you.

The premise is good, as is the story, despite the gaffs within .

People like stories to be short too!