by Freckleman64
Wow what a story.......I wasn't going to click on this but thought I would take a look, and hate to quit reading, and hopefully will not have to wait long to read on. I love Colin, but why do people get involved like this. This guy is so rich, and Colin was making him that way. Good heavens did it never dawn on him that it was his money. He sees it now so hopefully he gets to do something about it, and gets the son of a bitch put in Jail, Love it Love it, and hope to get to read more, and you are such a great story teller
I am shocked at this chapter. I was so hopeful for a great partnership with Colin and Zach. I fear for both of them. Colin will probably be killed or go to prison for life. I have a feeling Zach dies as well so am very pissed. However, the story has me and the writing terrific. No longer a favorite story as the consequences of Colin's actions are beyond repair.
Wow, I can envision all of this happening the way you’ve written the details and dialogue. Feels like I’m watching a movie! I can see both Scientology and the last season or two of Burn Notice that featured a leader like Dominus.