All Comments on 'Seducing The Substitute'

A very good first offering, well done.

Very nice story. Thank you for sharing.

Sweet!

Mature, complex, and very erotic. Very nicely done in tone and content. The high level of mechanical errors--especially in punctuation but also wrong homonyms (to/too; there/they're/their)-- brought my rating down from 5 to 4.

I thought it was an especially clever move, on your part, NOT having the hero have sex with the sister. I also appreciate a sexually adventurous woman (Abby) NOT being called a "slut" by anyone.

What a first story.

Very well done. Looking forward to more.

This is a wonderful first story!

BRAKING the kiss = BREAKING

YOUR right = YOU'RE

Instead of claiming to be a viking warrior (are you 12?), get your grammar correct.

Excellent story. Definite agreement with the comment that you avoid extremes and abusive language. Sensuous and pleasing.

To the comment that a missed apostrophe is indicative that you might be 12: this is a good example of how pointing and shaking a finger in your direction leaves that commenter with three fingers pointing in their direction.

Nothing could be more petty and junior HS than this competitive, superior attitude. Please accept an apology the rest of us

Classic British understatement. Well done, ignore the naysayers you have talent, keep it going.