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by mnkind

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Calit69Calit69about 15 years ago
Right on

Read both stories Very diffrent but really good command of language. You describe a really good scene and stimulate the imagination

Look forward to more of your stories. Would like to see you develop characters more and engage in more powerful eroticism. Well done

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