All Comments on 'Seduction In Bunny Pyjamas Ch. 02'

But then you stopped before going anywhere. Hmmm.

I like the slow build of your story. I didn't think of the sex part as foreplay necessarily. It was more of Jamie taking advantage of a confused and vulernable woman. Also, something to make Draven a little jealous and realize Alex might not be there forever for him. Better lose the playboy attitude and take what you really want! :) Can't wait to see what happens when she goes home.

I really like the set-up. You've done a good job so far and I look forward to the rest. I really like the title too!!

Interesting situation and development. Look forward to more.

You did a great job of making Alex look like a doormat yet again. I guess she'll suffer emotional and possibly physical abuse her whole life because she's incapable of showing some spine.

Your words, not your punctuation, show the emotion.

"Jamie?" she gasped. is sufficient.

Having said that, there is nothing wrong with your story telling. I realy like the story so far.