All Comments on 'Seduction in Paradise Pt. 12'

Everything about this was a wonderful story of adventure and discovery. Such great story telling and fun characters that kept the reader engaged and wanting for more. Top shelf entertainment and an enjoyable read. Thanks for your time to write and publish. Cheers

5 stars from me, but that's for the entire series. The final installment disappointed. It ended without concluding. I don't know what you could/should have done differently but I didn't expect the story to just peter out.

Ends with a whimper. What happened?

I had planned on another couple of chapters. Sadly, life happened, and it had to complete the story or put it off for another couple of months. I've done that with other stories, and they still haunt me because I try and get back into the characters, but it doesn't work. I appreciate the numbers and comments.

I don't know when I'll publish something again here on Literotica, but hopefully in the Fall.

Loved the story and thank you O2. Would have loved more chapters and disappointed we didn't get more on the mother trying on and wearing micro bikinis.

I hope next chapters will come. And move towards in the direction I'm hoping 🤞🤞🤞