All Comments on 'Seeing Doubles Pt. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
They're so sweet

I love how nice and free the characters are! I would like a little more explanation about how we got there though. Our protagonist seems very willing to just go for it with the characters in the story. Also -- it's super unclear -- what is the purpose of the superpower school? You've cultivated a college vibe, but there's no given reason for it's existence.

~ Nick

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