All Comments on 'Seeing My Sister in the Shower'

by kevinnash

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Every guy should have a sister like Nellie. Nice read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Well... obviously few more parts needed

Frankie1952Frankie1952over 1 year ago

More please. surely this was just the beginning of them doing the nasty with each other and who knows where it will go after that

lantern04lantern04over 1 year ago

A nice short story. I would enjoy seeing more from this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hmm... I am absolutely positive that I have read this before...

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is beyond 5 stars & needs a few more chapters.

ih8workih8workover 1 year ago

This is the best story I have read in a long time. You made it believable, used good grammar and made it short enough to not get bored.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

A very hot story and you wasted no time. I hope there's more, but after that it would be hard to add anything.

oldpantythiefoldpantythiefover 1 year ago

That went from outrage to a BJ in one page. Definitely needs to reciprocate and keep the action going.

CharletteCharletteover 1 year ago

Well that was an unexpected turn of events !

Some guys just have all the luck !

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

omg...I know that has to just be part one....please continue

Carnevil9Carnevil9over 1 year ago

Short and sweet and hot as fuck! Nice job.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nellie deserves to be eaten and fucked, chapter 2 please!

Crusader235Crusader235over 1 year ago

Oh hell that was Hot! Turn about for Nellie is required. Part Deuce please.

Five stars.

cykloscyklosover 1 year ago

A bit short, but very sweet and enjoyable to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Very Hot! In the next story they've got to start fucking.

Trevithic2Trevithic2over 1 year ago

Five stars for a great read,

GraecaGraecaover 1 year ago

Soeur salope... Mérite grande baise merci beaucoup de cette passion

Musicalcat2019Musicalcat201910 months ago

Looking forward to reading the next Instalments. Cock already leaking.

Musicalcat2019Musicalcat201910 months ago

Can't wait until the next chapter

GothOsTheC0njurerGothOsTheC0njurer10 months ago

This was short but darn it it worked! 5 it made me feel and that's what counts!

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