by buxtonboy
Very fun read!! I especially was surprised that you set it in and out of the way country. Gave you a 5!!
Good story, even though some of the words, tenses and people speaking got a bit mangled
Good tale with some intriguing, almost suspenseful components and enough sex to keep it interesting. I didn’t particularly like the various first person narratives at first but that grew on me as the story went along and it turned out to be well done. The ending was abrupt but it brought good closure and was happy so nice job.