by JenniferO1
Awesome effort. Sounds exactly like an experience I wish I'd had once. I'm a virgin...to your stories and I enjoyed the first I've read from you immensely. At the outset, I'm tempted to say the telling of this tale was delicious, but I'm torn. Hard to tell if you're incredibly adventurous in real life or incredibly talented in cyber life.
Regardless, It'd be great to see her run into him again one day....or you, ANY day.
I'd write more, but I'm afraid my orgasm has left me a cripple. (Yeah, I'm a Seinfeld fan.)
Check her story list. Lots of H's there. This one is destined for an H too.
...to read your stories, Jen! This one's hot and those lil cars are cute too!
My old girl had a ghia, our adventures weren't this hot but at this date date they are. Thanks!
Jenn, I too had a convertable Ghia and my father sold it while I was at college. Mine was a '69. This story, so well written, made me miss my car and got me so hot at the same time. I think about the possibilities that I missed Your words excite me and have me running to the classified ads. Congratulations on a wonderful story.
Oh Jenn! You know all the right buttons to push. You have the knack of building the story into a really believable hot climax. Your female traits add a softness to the story that seperates it from the common unblievable fuck junk. Please keep submitting, your one of the best!
Jenn:
I've read all your stories and loved them all. I dont know if they are fiction or not but it really doesnt matter. Great Stuff!!!
This story is so hot! I got interested and searched out the rest of your stuff on the site and loved all of them!
Wonderful, Erotic writing. Creative use of the alphabet. Who says all used car salespeople are bad?
Jenn, that was one of the best stories I've ever read. Got me to check out the rest of your stuff, too.
Got any other cars you want to sell?
;D
I enjoyed my first automotive blowjob in my '73 Ghia coupe, also Olympic Blue, from a beautiful size-3 young woman, coming back from a Hollywood dance club about ten years ago.
Though our relationship didn't last long, your story sure brought back some fond memories of our brief time together.
As for the car, I recently sold it to a friend of mine whom I knew would love it and care for it. Wouldn't ya know, after he cleaned it up a little it won first place in a car show!
Thanks again for the memories.
Jen you write so believably. Please give us a new story real soon!
you really do a wonderful job of pacing and build up. Thanks so much! I used to go on weekend road trips from college in a Ghia with a buddy of mine. We had a bowl full of weed that we could stick on the dashboard with two tubes running from it as we headed to the mountains to enjoy the fall foliage. Guess lots of folks have great Ghia memories :D
Probably was in the wrong catagory, but that was one hell of a hot story! It was credible too, I guess that really could happen - not freakin' likely, but it could. That sure got a rise out of me! Nice going!
Probably was in the wrong catagory, but that was one hell of a hot story! It was credible too, I guess that really could happen - not freakin' likely, but it could. That sure got a rise out of me! Nice going!
It seems like every story of yours that I read is better than the last. If you paint as well as you write, you're going to be in a lot of museums. The beautiful picture of you allows me some wonderful fantasizing too.
Damn that was sexy. I don't think I have had that much fun on my own in a long time. Thank you for the good read, and the hot orgasm. Creative, and well written I loved every sentence.
Now this one left me nice and hard and longing to experience that with you myself Jenn. Nice erotic juicy story! Thank you.
MF
Excellent story! A little something for (almost) everybody.
Nice story. A lot of writers miss a great thing by not including interactions with others, like with the friends in this story. Or getting caught and dealing with the personal interactions. All of it adds up to spice up stories. Just some thoughts of mine. Anyway, this story had a lot of good elements in it. Keep it up.
I LOVED THIS STORY, HAD A 58 GHIA CONVERTIBLE. MY GIRLFRIEND AND I
WOULD PARK AND FUCK OUR BRAINS OUT IN IT'S TIGHT CONFINES. WISH I'D USED THE HOOD! GREAT MEMORIES OF MY BYGONE YOUTH. THANKS..
It's nice to hear a story from someone who really knows how to please a woman, and knows how great being a woman can be, when someone knows which spots to hit, and which ones come first, and what drives a woman over the edge that most don't want to go over, they loose too much control, when they are doing it for the fun of it. I like my women to loose control and sink into a sea of pleasure, that's when I take control and take her to place that scare her into even greater and wilder experiences, and the only drugs I use are estrogen and endorphins, both produced by the woman's own endogenous system. To be with such a woman could only be topped by being that woman.
The story seems believable. I wish I could still come multiple times in one evening.
It's so nice to read about a woman totally and unashamedly loving sex. I know so many who do,but who feel they have to pretend not to.
Your writing is very good, and the pacing of the story is just right.
Thank you, I enjoyed it very much. :)
What a clever plot and excellent story, exceedingly hot. Makes me want to buy a used VW!
FOR SALE wonderful example of VW's finest model. This is a "time warp" cabriolet that spent it's entire life in California. 90,000 actual miles, but so nice you'd easily think it had more like 15,000 original miles. Has to be one of the finest examples in existence with baby blue paint, black canvas convertible top, custom wheels and many special touches. Original manual and original window sticker is still with the car. Price negotiable. Call Denny at the Surf Shop.
My wife and I have experienced most everthing you have written about (except the weed) and have thoroughly enjoyed both your writing and the experiences. We love how descriptive you are. Been there ....done that...haven't you ! BARE469
Great story, well written. Definitely reminded me of my youth, just wish I could do it all over!
Thanks again!
Very graphic, while extremely well-written. Love that the narrator is female! Totally hot!
Wow what a story - I loved my car too - just wish I had bought it from you!
Hi Jenn:
Thanks for a six-star great story!
I have had sex in cars, but never as hot as what you and Denny enjoyed.
You write very well. And as a man, I especially enjoy the female perspective and train of thought.
PS: I have read and enjoyed all your other stories. I know from my professional writing how much work goes into planning, drafting and polishing a written item
Karman Ghia! Yes, you hooked me to read your story with it, same car I learn to drive with, mine had some of the floor missing, did yours? Oh what a blast (of my boyfriends cum down my throat) from the past. We had a lot of sex with that car, I'd was fucked on the hood, bent over the hood, eaten on the hood, sucked several cocks and fingered by their owners (sorry honey, the stories were true), smoked our brains out in it. I'm 58 now and want to go have sex in one of those babies right now. Karman Ghia, fuck, where's my rabbit. If there was a meetup of owners, I'd be riding a lot of cock in them. THX for jogging that brain cell.
Super hot and beautifully written. It's nice to read an erotic story authentically told from a woman's point of view. Keep writing...you have real talent!