All Comments on 'Selling the Pitch'

OMG!

I luv this story I did not make to the end before I came. It’s one of the best I’ve read here in a long time thank you so much

Hot story! I haven't bottomed in years, but you made me want to flip back to that!

Superlative, as usual...

You always write such amazing and thrilling stories. I love the dark trips into the minds of your characters.

You held me spell-bound from start to finish. It's a long one, but so carefully written that I couldn't 'put down the book'! For the first time on here, I could completely 100% see the characters in the situation, whether it was by the bar or trying to sleep, or actually fucking. Top marks my friend. I will be checking out your other stuff very shortly.

Simply wonderful and super hot! Thank you!!

My first of your stories, and I really liked this, the characters are pitched at a good believable and likeable level. Any chance of a sequel? Just don't ruin the characters.

My only criticism is the short sentences, which makes it a bit of a choppy read, otherwise great writing.

Strand

I’m surprised the screen I’m reading this on didn’t melt from the heat emanating off the page. Though it’s been done, the business trip tryst, I’ve never seen it done this well. “ It was like watching someone load a gun or sharpen a knife.” That about sums it up. Bravo!

Simply AMAZING!!!! What a great story!!! The detail was outstanding!! Had me hard all the way through. I need to go get fucked in my ass right now I'm so horny. Great story and you're a fantastic writer!!!

I loved the story. It was very descriptive and hot. I've never experienced a man inside of my ass. Oh do I want to try it now. Hopefully the right man will cross my path and take me. Thank you for the story.