by PervyPopsicle
While the plot is interesting, it is spoiled by the reversal of gender in the story where Sen becomes female and Skala male - the opposite to the introduction. It would be helpful to revise the story and re-post it to do your work justice. Speed is no excuse for sloppiness!
NON HUMAN!!!!!! There is a whole category for it! 1* for wrong category. Why the fuck does Lit allow stories to be posted in the wrong category? Sorry I forgot, unless Randi cries and is upset NOTHING gets done on this site. Has gone down hill since she came along!
To offset the troll. You would get better scores in non human though.
Simply because the readers here clearly don’t agree that non humans can
have romance too. Super narrow minded if you you ask me.
Story was alright but I would suggest maybe doing a re-upload and an edit for category and spelling mistakes because apparently the other two comments here didnt appreciate that.