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All Comments on 'Sensory Overload'

by CarolinaAmber

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mel_pomenemel_pomenealmost 10 years ago
It is far from being a flop ...

... but it is a little on the short side and I'm sure it would benefit from a careful rewrite, when it would be worth a higher score than I have given it. Well done on your first outing into story-telling and please, please, keep on writing. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us.

elisebeeelisebeealmost 10 years ago
Very sweet

A well crafted vignette. I enjoyed it very much.

im_going_im_goingim_going_im_goingalmost 10 years ago
5 stars

Beautiful. I like the softness. :3

William smythWilliam smythalmost 10 years ago
If this is BDSM

You certainly make it sound attractive.

This is a very good first story that deserves a much higher rating than it is currently receiving. I hope my 5 star vote helps.

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