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Click hereShe also collapsed and laid on top of my body while we panted and rested. After several minutes, she got up into the bathroom and took out a first aid kit. She laid me gently down on the bed and climbed on top of me like she was going to ride me, but I was all spent. Instead, she cleaned the wound on my arm and gave it butterfly kisses before wrapping the bandage around it. She looked down on me like an angel in heaven with the softest cutest smile. Then she looked up behind me and her smile turned into a smirk.
I turned my head around and there was my wife Bonnie standing by the open door with a key in her hand. I was stunned and awkwardly speechless. At first she had a hurtful expression, but soon it turned into one of bitterness and anger as she stormed out of there. We cleaned up and without a word, I opened the window and climbed out.
I was already out the window when I felt Kaitlyn's hand on my shoulder. Then turning around, before I knew it, she held my face with her soft hands and pressed her lips to mine with her eyes closed. At that very moment, my heart stopped and time stood still. After several seconds, she smiled at me and closed the window.
Things between Bonnie and I got worse after that incident. At first it was I who presented the divorce option and she pleaded with me for marriage counseling. However, now she too was pressing for divorce. I tried to reason with her of course, telling her I slept with her baby sister but she cheated on me for who knows how long with her coworkers. But none of that mattered to her, she didn't care, she didn't want to reason, and she just wanted everything to end and walk away. She was a woman scorned and there was no reasoning with her.
- COMMENTS
JeffJaredover 1 year agoAuthorHi,
Thanks for your comment, your take is a little strange. Well, as you know the stories are mostly tongue-in-cheek fiction of depraved fun. They're not really "realistic" per say, in fact "A Night Out With the Girls" pretty much stepped over the fantasy line with mysterious underground clubs and what not.
The reason for this story specifically is because I got tired of writing about Bonnie and want to switch things up. Originally this is pretty much the end to the stories about her and the protagonist will move on to other stories with other women, more specifically he marries Kaitlyn. One reader actually caught this hint towards the end of this story, much to my surprise.
Anyways, this transition never happened for various reasons. First, I started writing unrelated stories, which pretty much remove the need for this transition. In fact, some of the stories I've published in the unrelated section were originally from this story arc. Another reason is because I find the character Kaitlyn a bit too specific. She would only appeal to readers who like petite 5 feet tall skinny Asian women. Bonnie is much more of a "typical" Asian woman.
For example, the latest story I just published, "Ojiisan," was originally meant to feature Kaitlyn since it is more or less a standalone sequel to Old Dirty Bastards and I didn't want to use the same girl. However, for the reason above, I kept it Bonnie because again, she is a less specific taste and more general representation of a typical Asian woman.
Yeah, so hope that answer the question. Some have asked when this story first came out, why the "sudden" change in direction as none of the stories previous to this hinted at any marital issues. The reason is purely I was trying to transition to writing about other women, b/c after a while the more stories involving Bonnie, the more unrealistic they become... Nobody lives a life this raunchy, right? But since now I do write unrelated story, seemed this transition was not really necessary after all.
:)
Marsascover 1 year agoI’ve enjoyed the series. It’s been over the top and fun but now I have to wonder why the husband does not man up and take a lot of responsibility for what has happened to her. Well into the marriage he pimps her out to dangerous gangbangers because it gets him off. At. Any time she could be choked or have organs ruptured resulting in her death. Then he reads her diaries and learned she as a nympho she was trained and encouraged to be abused. She marries him trying to get away from the lifestyle and he throws her back he the fire because being cucked. Turn it around. Have the husband man up. There is no reason the two can develop a safe, diviant sex life they both can enjoy.
JeffJaredalmost 2 years agoAuthorWow, nice deduction. Yes, actually the story is already written. However, this story, which the protagonist finally gets together with Kaitlyn is not in the NCR section. It would go under "love story" actually. So I've been hesitant to publish it. Why? The story element in this one is far more advanced and serious. NCR stories I've published are always borderline tongue in cheek, b/c that's what the mods would allow.
So that really sucks because a lot of good stories can't be published due to that reason and only really silly and not so serious stories can get published.
timrivalmost 2 years agoHope he marries the sister. Would serve the wife for fucking around on him in the first place. It would be even better if the sister and he had kids and rubbed it the wife’s face.
mattenwabout 3 years agoWhat do you want with a whore who allows two plumbers to rape her and then has fun? Get rid of the whore and enjoy your life!
