All Comments on 'Sergeant's Surprise'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Never

Never fails to amaze me that people click on an 'NC' story and then are offended by its content. Must be something in the water where these people live.

I liked the story!

celticlasscelticlassabout 18 years ago
Well done!

Another good work. I'm already looking forward to reading the next chapter! Love the BD at the end; very tantalizing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
More

Nice twist at the end, which has me waiting for more, very well written. And by the way, I am not a loser, nor am I sick. I enjoy a well written story. This story was very well written in my opinion.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Nice one

It was a pretty good telling of a common theme. I enjoyed it. Oh, and for the record, I feel pity for the morons who try to dis you for your story, but can't even spell.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Surprise!

Did NOT see the end coming, left me aroused and wanting more.

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