by Parthenokinesis
I really loved this. Definitely some suspense--a great tease. I especially loved that it isn't obvious what gender the sub is, so anyone can imagine themselves in the role. Fantastic. Mmmm, those panties...
on BDSM fantasy. Rapid pace, actual suspense in the format, and implied obedience by the sub. Hooked my attention and kept it.
I found this exciting and unusual - it is a shame it appears to have been truncated - in the title, at least.
Nonetheless, a well-written and really dirty story - thank you!