All Comments on 'Seriously? Ch. 02'

I see you're using a lot less of the "?!" - thank you, that's a vast improvement.

Well, these are rather short. I suppose if you continue updating frequently it shouldn't be a problem though.

Kisses,

Laney

I am loving this story. Just wish the chapter was longer even if you do update frequently.

Thanks.

I like where your story is going but one word of advice. I would be careful when referring to a certain race as you did in the beginning of the story. I, for one, don't mind it but others may. Otherwise good story!

Yeah, I guess.... I'll work on that. :) I accidently pressed the send button! I'm clumsy at times.

Note: These stories will be longer. I promise. I'm going for two pages now. If there are any grammar or spelling mistakes I am willing to listen. You can always give me feed back through here at the feedback button other than comments, I always reply so don't be shy. (That kind of rhymes! ;p)

Has a great level of sarcastic humor that I love. It reminds me of high school.

Please I have been waiting....more more more!!