All Comments on 'Served up at the Party'

get it I guess

That was a great buildup for a really sudden and disappointing end.

This story was such a turn on. I'm a trans man myself and there are rarely stories that don't hinge on transphobia that are actually well written... I would love more of this dynamic... I've reread it af least 6 six times and probably will again...

When I originally wrote this, I ended it right after the Dom tells the servers they could do anything the wanted, but I was worried readers would want the orgasm/penetration. Is that where the story is falling flat? Where are you left wanting more? Happy to flesh this out more as a piece, still trying to nail down the pacing in short works.

I think you should put a warning in for intentional misgendering.

I'm a trans guy and this is one of my biggest fantasies. So hot!!!

i fucking despise this shit. thought i was actually for once, as a transman, getting some not fetishizing shit that actually worked for me considering there is nothing for a straight (submissive) transman. but no. just this absolute gross shite. the biggest fuck you. you have no idea how hard it is for people like us.

i'm ftm and this is so fucking hot. thank you for writing a humiliation story. i keep coming.