by mmjane
This one was different from Mosaic but that is not to say it is not as good. Just different. In Mosaic I liked that you acknowledged terms like Master or Sir weren't necessary, the dominance and submission was obvious and needed no reinforcement. Here you used the term Master but it was effective and conveyed your state of mind. He sent you away unfulfilled again reinforcing the objectification and use of you for his own gratification. You implied that some pain was arousing to you but didn't dwell on it or make it the focus. All in all I like you and think you represent someone I would enjoy.